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Autumn Fire by Enamorte Autumn Fire by Enamorte
This one was nice to do, although I'm not a huge fan of orange, because it made me think of autumn. Since autumn has just begun here, it seemed fitting. :) When choosing the wings, monarchs seemed a little too obvious, so I went with some random type of orange butterfly that Google gave me, which I don't know the name of.

There's something a bit off about this one that I think has to do with lighting, but for the life of me I wasn't able to fix it. See if you can spot it for me and let me know.

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I really do quite like this picture, though as you say there is something a little off about it.

As far as i can tell, it simply comes down to defining the shadows, and separating the fore and backgrounds.

One of the most distracting things in this image is the barely noticeable difference between the leaves and the dress. I would suggest introducing a few darker reds and browns amongst the leaves, and possibly a few dark yellows. That should make the foreground pop a bit more.

As for the foreground, I think just adding a bit more depth of colour to the shadows would do the trick. Orange is one of the hardest colours to do shading for, as we automatically tend to try and shade with reds. I would try shading with some brown and then add a bit of colour to that.

I hope that helps you. But as I said, It is still a lovely artwork ^_^
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liveinmymewzik Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I cant say anything is "off" about it, except maybe the sparks could be brighter
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liveinmymewzik Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
so well done, just PERSONALLY, not resonating with the color orange. a very dense color
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BunnyMommy Featured By Owner May 15, 2013
Absolutely gorgeous!
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KlaraKay Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Student Digital Artist
love it! ;-)
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sage2434 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is beautiful but where's her thumb on the raised hand?
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Enamorte Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012   Digital Artist
It's there, it's just not very distinct because it's sort of lined up with her palm. :blush:
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sage2434 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
oh ok :D
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MarvaraTorrent Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
Awesome ^^
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Bamboo-Angel Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2012
She is so lovely! So many beautiful shades of orange, and I love the detailing in the leaves behind her.
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bluetaipan Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
"Your amazing deviation has been selected for feature this week at :iconaus-art: **" Featured Works! :love:
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Arah019 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012
Superb!
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Nina-Lipkin-Art Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
such gorgeous vibrant colors!
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Noack-Art Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012
As beautiful as all your fairies. I really love her dress, it's very different to the others. =)
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MoonbowArts Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Very interesting. Very interesting, indeed!

Okay, since I'z is lackin' in the Premium Membership thingy....

Since the light seems almost entirely above her head, then I think the main issue is simply that the shadows aren't quite dark enough to really bring that out, especially in the lowermost folds of the skirt. Additional shading beneath the bust would help as well, and impart more definition to the shape of her body. The additional shadows don't need to be very dark, just a little bit more in the way of shadows to define shape and contour, which is getting a little lost in the vivid background shades. Aside from that, I can't really see what else might be done or required.

All in all, though, I think the execution is very well done, and certainly an eye catcher. The devil is in the details. :D

Hope that helps!
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